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Duet Contest! 
for letting me draw ryanxlire/lenxrin, as she has draw them and submitted her own drawing before me. Really thanks! ~
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Sta.sh
I'm one of the judges for the RyanXLire Duet contest.
Would you mind if I write a critique for this pic? After all, it's my job as a judge.
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The drawing is vibrant in its own right. The fine lines are neatly drawn, and the base colors are downright vibrant. The anatomy is good, and the poses are awesome. The outfits are plain cool, and Lire's face is so damn cute.
However, I would also like to point out some flaws in the pic. It seems that the hands are nothing more than stumps...and I've seen a lot of Vocaloid cliches lately...it's becoming a bit of an eyesore (*cough* Miku Hatsune *cough*). Also, the mouths don't look like they're open...
The background is plain, but anyway I still like it.
For Originality, I would like to give you 2.5/5 because the concept is somewhat overused. But for Artistic style, I would give you a 4/5 because I never thought you would put much effort on this one. And, for epicness, it's sad to say, but you don't get the Epic Pwn Badge...I would rather be fair with you and give you a 3/5 as a consideration.
Thank you for allowing me to coment on your drawing. Any replies? Just note me.
you mean Shemale